Saturday, April 18, 2009

the planning essay

hey guys im trying to plan that essay but obviously its confusing im thinking it means that we as humans would perfer to be knowledgable rather than ignorant of the feelings we are capable of possesing. im going to start planning it that way because i have my dance competition tomorrow and want to get my homework done today so please blog back if im totally in the wrong ball park.

Also i would like to know how long you got for your timed write so dont go over. thanks for your help.

2 comments:

sarah said...

oh yeah also is it opkay to say i agree with the authors opinion when your doing your thesis? i never know if saying i is okay. but i dont know how to not say it either! im in a little bit of a predicament.

Ally said...

its probably better to stay away from using i in your thesis but if u cant figure out how to say it any other way i wouldn't worry about it and would just move on... and i thought the same thing u did when i read the passage for homework