Does this sound alright???? this is just the first chunck
Topic--The authors detail potrays a nostalgic tone by using audio and visual imagery.
Example--"The boys swam in silence" but tried to make the akwardness cice by "telling stories to each other..." of the old times they used to have.
Commentary- The boys felt extremely unpleasnt with one another as it would be if you entered an elevator with a couple of unknown persons and rode it all the way to the tenth floor being able to hear a penny drop.
Commentay(I feel like this is weak)-- The reader feels as though the boys envy the old times they used to have together; laughing and being able to talk about anything without the conversation feeling hollow.
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oh and cice was ment to be like the word stop but i dont know how to spell it just like i dont know how to spell alot of words :)
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