Example-- While reflecting on the old times the boys had together the narrator "loves the boys' voices bloomed around him..." but while they "floated through the river shouting each other down..." the narrator began to drift back to reality.
Commentary-- The author conveys the narrator as feeling happy and filled with excitement while thinking his relationship with his brothers might be taking a positive turn.
Commentary-- The reader quickly realizes that the bothers relationship is damaged ans will never result in the positive turn the narrator longs for.
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Sorry I didn't see this. I went to bed at 730 last night. Getting used to Flex is hard. I'll try to be better about checking now that you guys might actually post :)
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